Today I uploaded my corrections for both the manuscript and the front/back cover design. The cover design was too simplistic; I provided detailed feedback on how to improve it. The manuscript text was in general typeset and formated in good fashion. That said, I still have 14 pages of corrections; some of the errors are my fault, like the wrong tense of a verb. Some of the issues Bookbaby owns from misjudgements in formatting and font style choices. The new cover is due back to me around Nov. 26th and the updated manuscript on Dec. 2nd.